Shorting Code down

[Mekire]

yes something like that but i also need it so it can have a character counting system intergrated into it and it can have a password up to 6-12 characters

Well it already tells you if the password is less than 6.  Pretty simple to also invalidate greater than 12.

or is my system good enough

Up to you.  It isn't even clear to me if your code doesn't have logical errors the way it is written.  It isn't what I would want to see if I were your teacher.